The “boring” conversation between the husband and wife was actually really interesting. I mean, it was boring, of course, but it was really interesting how you conveyed that without actually having the writing itself be boring.
Or, another way to say it is, their boring conversation was definitely drawing me in, leaving me wanting to know more about them.
I think that’s a real talent to be able to write like that. It’s honestly impressive.
Thanks Michael. It's all too common, but I also wanted to move this seemingly "happy" marriage in a new direction that leads into the next book. Appreciate your comment.
The “boring” conversation between the husband and wife was actually really interesting. I mean, it was boring, of course, but it was really interesting how you conveyed that without actually having the writing itself be boring.
Or, another way to say it is, their boring conversation was definitely drawing me in, leaving me wanting to know more about them.
I think that’s a real talent to be able to write like that. It’s honestly impressive.
Thanks Michael. It's all too common, but I also wanted to move this seemingly "happy" marriage in a new direction that leads into the next book. Appreciate your comment.
Wow, that took an uncomfortable turn ... great writing ... I'm ready for the novel!