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Ash Hoffman's avatar

Breaking that moment down by different studies was so interesting!

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Vince Wetzel's avatar

Thanks. As I started writing, the character began talking scientifically, I thought that maybe he was a bio-med student, then I went through the courses he might take and boom, everything clicked into place! Thank you for reading!

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Mary's avatar

I enjoyed the breakdown of this story into different classes. It was a different format to telling an age old story.

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Vince Wetzel's avatar

Thanks for reading. Yes, the fun of discovery writing is finding directions to take the story in the moment. As a bio-med major, of course all of his studies, both in and out of class, would fit into the world of classes and syllabi.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Hah, a nice blend of study and love! 😊

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Vince Wetzel's avatar

with a side of "D'oh!"

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